Friday, 17 September 2021

My Writing This Week.

                                                           15 Minute writing


Mr.Fishy and his family dislike the dreadful SUSHI SHOP! Mr.Fishy has horrible memories. His mother and father told Mr.Fishy to NEVER go near the shore, but one cloudy day Mr.Fishy went near the shore. Big hands came down from the sky. Mr.Fishy thought "Is it my time yet?" "no no no it isn't i know."

Before the big hands reached the ground Mr.Fishy's Parents sacrificed themselves. They were taken:(

                                                                      DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN


Mr.Fishy sadly found out that later after they were taken, They were taken to the SUSHI SHOP!!! Mr.Fishy was so sad he wouldn't even eat!!

THE END   

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4 comments:

  1. SaulSTL30 September 2021 at 09:23

    Hi Ava Great job your story is fun to read even though it is a bit sad when Mr Fishy's parents die 5 out of 5

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  2. SophieLcw30 September 2021 at 10:25

    Hey Ava!
    I love this story, its a great plot and i love the "DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUN" part of the story the most.
    Keep up the good work! :D
    -Soph Da Loaf

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  3. Anonymous30 September 2021 at 11:52

    Hello Ava!
    Your story is very good to read But it is a bit sad at end.Also keep up the good work! What made you write this this story ?

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  4. Anonymous21 October 2021 at 14:25

    NNNOOOOO NOT MR FISHYS PARENTS

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