Thursday, 26 November 2020

The Plot

                                                                         The Plot


The Mice finished preparing for the big plot. If you're wondering what the “plot” is, we are going to steal the GOLDEN CHEESE. 


Freds Plan:



Where is the cheese

Museum

How to get in

Camouflage suits

What town is it in 

Cheesewood

Why 

We want “The GOLDEN CHEESE”


Fred is smart (in a way), he has very good vocab (In a way).

THE GOLDEN CHEESE AKA camembert is scrumptious and the best cheese in the world.


The Museum

We go into the museum, you see it's still open. We go quietly when people go in. we get a map and look to see The GOLDEN CHEESE but it doesn't say anything about cheese. So we steal money from the person in front actually the human drops the coins so we quickly grab it. 


We turn around and we see THE GOLDEN CHEESE. We gallop over to the cheese and we try to grab it but it's so far away. So we climb, we stare at the cheese and we lie next to it and take it away back to the barn.

The End

 


 


1 comment:

  1. To:Ava
    I like how you did the plan to get the cheese, Next time I think you could maybe make it a bit longer, but anyway it was great!
    It was kind of like my story how they were stealing stuff!
    From:Lily

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